If
a house is an extension of its occupant’s brain, then when it gets turned
upside down, the brain is affected too.
Especially if books are involved.
Last week all my books were crowded into two smallish bedrooms, while
downstairs the plaster was hacked off and replaced, and a damp course put in. The ceilings haven’t collapsed – not yet. There’s more work going on this week.
Domestic
surrealism isn’t all bad: upturned chairs on the spare bed, a bath on the
sitting-room floor. Things that I’d
forgotten have reappeared, including this book.

Here’s
a sample from several consecutive pages, to try to show what the book does. On one side is an extract from a Gerard
Manley Hopkins letter:
One of two kinds of clearness one
should have – either the meaning to be felt without effort as fast as one reads
or else, if dark at first reading, when once made out to explode.
The
commentary quotes Hopkins’ ‘The Windhover’ as an example of exploding clarity. On
the opposite page, for the other sort of clarity, are around a dozen lines from
Ezra Pound’s ‘Canto 49’:
Comes then snow scur on the river
And a world is covered with jade
Small boat floats like a lanthorn,
The flowing water clots as with
cold. And at San Yin
they are a people of leisure.
..the equal distribution of
emphasis, so that on each and every thing the poem, as it were, sheds its light…
This is the value of free verse. In the absence of metre the poem’s emphasis
falls everywhere. Everything, so Pound would have us believe, is illuminated.
The key element of poetry, he argued, is light.
Over
the page is John Clare’s ‘Mouse’s Nest’,
A poem about looking, a poem
attentive to its own attention, which wanders, and in wandering, stumbles
across things.
And
then Charles Olson’s ‘May 31, 1961’ which starts,
the lilac moon of the earth’s
backyard
which gives silence to the whole
house
falls down
out of the sky
over the fence
poor planet
now reduced
to disuse
Here
there’s a commentary that takes in Whitman’s lilacs on the dooryard, Ashbery’s “the
lake a lilac cube”, and the making-it-new effects of spacing, “the way, in the
poem, the attention falls”. The next
poem is ‘In Leonardo’s light’ by Lorine Niedecker, a different shape of
falling; and so on.
It’s
this juxtaposition which enables many of the insights:
What the book believes very
strongly.. is that poems are, among other things, commentaries on other poems,
that poems are readings, that poems enable the possibilities of other poems.
The
book ranges from Homer and Sappho to Dickinson, Apollinaire, Empson, O’Hara;
and Ashbery and Hill, two of only a handful of living poets represented. Very much the western canon, though including several
American poets I’m not familiar with; and nearly all white male. Can I forgive the authors for leaving out
Elizabeth Bishop? They need to write a
sequel.
The
prose includes Wordsworth and Pound, but also William James (1892) on streams
of consciousness and an extract from I A Richards’ Practical Criticism, listing ten difficulties, from mnemonic
irrelevancies to stock responses and inhibition. There’s a quote from Nietzsche on poets, including:
A little voluptuousness and a little tedium: that is all their best
ideas have ever amounted to.
…
They are not clean enough for me, either; they all disturb their waters
so that they may seem deep!
And
there’s Muriel Rukeyser’s sonnet ‘Homage to Literature’:
then stare into the lake of sunset as it
runs
boiling, over the west past all
control
rolling and swamps the heartbeat and
repeats
sea beyond sea after unbearable
suns;
think: poems fixed this landscape: Blake,
Donne, Keats.
[Commentary]…The only true homage to
literature is literature, which is to
say, doing something.

Above
all, The Enthusiast Field Guide to Poetry
would make a perfect present for anyone who’s interested in reading, and ideas,
but doesn’t read much poetry and maybe doesn’t ‘get’ it. The fragmentary format also makes it perfect
holiday reading. The book has an order, which
doesn’t need to be followed. It has a
perfect last poem, ‘Salute’ by James Schuyler, too perfectly brief to quote
part of, better to go to the whole.
The Enthusiast Field
Guide to Poetry was
published by Quercus in 2007. It’s not
on their website, hence the Amazon link, which normally I’d avoid giving but it
shows plenty of copies. If you’re
curious about the learned authors, one of them is easy to identify by googling;
I’ve no idea who the other(s) are, though the writing style sounds uncannily
like someone I know. To end, here’s a
definition of theirs:
A poem is an arrangement of words
containing possibilities.
Dear Fiona
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like an interesting book and I'm with Nietzsche! We're in Fontainebleau for a while where I'm working hard on my fourteenth volume. I'm writing a couple of poems a day at the moment which is good going for me. Here is my latest:-
DRINKS MACHINE
My thirst was rising fit to burst
When I spotted a drinks machine.
I slotted in a euro
And observed the little screen.
My money hadn’t registered.
Imagine my surprise
When I hit the ‘Return Coins’ button
And didn’t win a prize.
‘There’s nothing we can do, we fear,
The machine’s no longer ours
And if we call an engineer
You’ll be waiting here for hours.’
I cursed and grinned, ‘Let it be so -
The universe wins one euro!’
Best wishes from Simon
Revenge poems against vending machines could become a genre. There's a machine I need to do this to.
DeleteDear Fiona
DeleteYes, I lost a euro but at least I got a poem out of it so I wasn't quite as choleric as I might have been!
Best wishes from Simon
Dear Fiona
ReplyDeleteHere's another new one for you. (Last one I promise!)
WASPS
The wasps they dance around the glass
Before diving in to drink.
Many things have come to pass
Provoking me to think.
I think of my long-suffering wife
(Her needles and her pins.)
I think about my wasted life
And of my many sins.
A wasp gets bored with drinking beer
And settles on my arm;
I feel the sting like anything
And try not to alarm
My wife who’s sitting next to me
And asking what I want for tea.
Best wishes from Simon R. Gladdish